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		<title>Story structure and Gospel</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[The reading was from Mark 1:35-45.
It is a perfectly plotted story arc. This is no accident.
Here&#8217;s the story (liberally rephrased):
Jesus, wants solitary time with God. He wants it badly enough to get up very early and go out to a quiet place. [OPPORTUNITY]
But the guys come and get him. They say, &#8220;What are you doing? [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-140" title="JesusByzantineMosaic" src="http://www.writeatlight.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2010/02/JesusMosaic.jpg" alt="Byzantine mosaic of Christ" width="250" height="250" />The reading was from Mark 1:35-45.</p>
<p>It is a perfectly plotted story arc. This is no accident.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s the story (liberally rephrased):</p>
<p>Jesus, wants solitary time with God. He wants it badly enough to get up very early and go out to a quiet place. [OPPORTUNITY]</p>
<p>But the guys come and get him. They say, &#8220;What are you doing? Everybody&#8217;s looking for you.&#8221; He says, &#8220;It&#8217;s time to go.&#8221; [PLOT POINT 1]</p>
<p>They go out to the towns around the area, where he heals and preaches, and then a leper comes and asks to be healed. Jesus looks at the man with compassion and chooses to heal him, but he says, &#8220;Don&#8217;t tell anybody.&#8221; [MIDPOINT]</p>
<p>The leper, being a human being who has been separated from the community for whatever period of time, cannot keep from telling people, and he tells everybody he meets.</p>
<p>Now the crowds are so great that Jesus is forced back into the deserted places [PLOT POINT 3], and they&#8217;re still coming after him.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s a short passage, with the arc more of a sequence (series of scenes) than an entire screenplay. Still, someone could write a screenplay with a parallel plot that could be a riveting movie.</p>
<p>But as I look at it again, I see that in this story, the protagonist is actually the crowd. Jesus wants, Jesus acts, but it&#8217;s the crowd&#8217;s desire that drives the action. The crowd wants miracles, why everybody&#8217;s looking for Jesus in the first act. It&#8217;s the crowd&#8217;s discovery that he can cure leprosy that is the turning point at the midpoint. It&#8217;s the growing crowd that forces Jesus out of the towns at the second plot point, and having &#8220;lost&#8221; him, surges out to the deserted places to find him again.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve heard it said that every story is one of two plot lines: &#8220;A man goes on a journey&#8221; or &#8220;A stranger comes to town.&#8221; This is both.</p>
<p>I said that it&#8217;s no accident that the Gospel story follows the plot outline that we now call classic screenplay structure, not because Mark was some &#8220;advanced&#8221; storyteller far ahead of his time, but because story is story is story. It&#8217;s written in the DNA of the human soul.</p>
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